Tuesday, February 14, 2017

First Date - A Short Story

 I have a new short story ready for you -- Hermit Writer

7 comments:

  1. The cover is very nice :)

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  2. Beautiful story, Mac. See - you can do lovey dovey!

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  3. This cover makes me curious !
    Best, Synnöve

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  4. Oh my, (now this is totally my take) this was quite spellbinding, for me. It was like he saw this other couple's entire life playing out just for him. Of course the Sixth Sense was running through my thoughts all the while as well, and POW! What a heavenly ending. I loved this, and trust me I don't hang on every writers words all the time. Bravo.

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  5. It was GOOD...really good my friend! I enjoyed every word and it's something I'll keep thinking about! Thank you SO much! Diane

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  6. you know i am not a reader - right?? first off, i will say i loved this short story, it really held my attention. was the other couple real?? was he imagining his future life with belinda?? this was interesting because as you can see, my imagination went wild.

    i don't really like first dates, they are just too awkward. i like the comfort of comfort in a relationship. chuck and i went on a date for valentine's day, a real date, where we tried harder. i guess it was nice, he opened the car door for me...but i like the comfort of real life!!

    you are a good writer mac - really good - and a short story like this is right up my alley!!!

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